TITLE: 100% Perfect
CAST: Man 1: Paolo Tenorio
Woman: Michelle Gamboa
Man 2: Mike Iinuma
Young Man 1: Kent Soliven*
Young Woman: May Gamboa*
*If possible
Fades in. Camera hovers around coffee shop/diner, watching an empty table, circling it then circling the objects on the table. Camera moves to a table where Man 2 waits patiently for Man 1 to arrive. All this time, music (your choice) plays in the background as the credits roll. At the end of the introduction, the camera films Man 2 and the coffee shop/diner entrance in the same frame. The music stops and the camera becomes still when Man 1 enters. Man 2 looks at Man 1 and nods his head to say hello. Man 1 does the same and sits by Man 2. (If on a table, camera switches to a side view of both men on the table, if on a bar, camera switches to behind the two men.) The camera stops. The dialogue begins. (Also if possible, during the introduction, Man 1 could narrate the first 4 paragraphs of the story, omitting ideas repeated in the coming dialogue to eliminate redundancy).
Man 1: Lost in thought and playing with bread crumbs on the table/bar.
"Yesterday on the street I passed the 100% girl."
Man 2: Reading South of the Border, West of the Sun. "Yeah? Good-looking?"
Man 1: "Not really." Takes a sip of his coffee.
Man 2: "Your favorite type, then?"
Man 1: Still playing with crumbs and sipping his coffee.
"I don't know. I can't seem to remember anything about her - the shape of her eyes or the size of her breasts."
Man 2: "Strange."
Man 1: Plays with crumbs.
"Yeah. Strange."
Man 2: "So anyhow, what did you do? Talk to her? Follow her?"
Man 1: "Nah. Just passed her on the street." Camera focuses on Man 1's hand tapping his cup of coffee.
Flashback transition. Black and White. Panoramic view of Man 1 walking from West to East and Woman walking from East to West. Camera switches to mid-view of the two, then to a close up of Man 1's body then a close up right in front of his face.
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